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BQ2008's Toy Story Ch. 12

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Chapter 12: Commupance

Sherman is feeling depressed than he has ever been in his toy life. He let his jealousy consume him, his friends don't trust him, Trent's going to move out of Illinois in at least a few hours from now, and he's trapped in the meanest kid's room in the block. 

</p>However, he heard a loud noise. The milkcrate's moving?! Alarmed, he looks up, only to see............Jimmy! He may be still strapped to that rocket, But Jimmy is trying to push the toolbox off!

"Jimmy?! What are you doing?! I thought you were-" Sherman then said.

"Come on, Sherman, there's a little 9-year old who needs us over in that house, Sherman. And we shouldn't let him down. It's time to free you from this thing!" Jimmy said, determined, pushing the crate.

"Yes, sir." Sherman said, saluting.

Sherman quickly adjusts his glasses and starts pushing the milkcrate and Jimmy continues pushing the toolbox. With their strengths, they begin to move the objects slowly. "Come on, Jimmy. We can do it." Sherman encouraged.

With the rain stopped and the sun beginning to rise... a moving truck can be seen pulling up in front of Trent's house!

"Sherman! It's the Moving Van!" Jimmy said, horrified, it's almost time to move!

"We gotta get out of here, now!" Sherman yelped.

Jimmy braces himself between the tool chest and the wall. Using his legs, Jimmy pushes with all his might like the Man of Steel known as Superman. The toolbox begins to move.

Sherman notices that with every shove Jimmy gives to the toolchest, the milkcrate begins to edge out over the lip of the desk, and eventually, a gap has been opened, and Sherman goes through it, he's free!

"Jim! I'm out!" Sherman whispered.

However, Poor Jimmy didn't noticed as he continued to push the tool box.

"Almost....there....." Jimmy grunted as he pushed everything off the workbench, Sherman nervously chuckles as the tools crashed ontop of him, luckily, Duncan is dumber than he realizes and keeps sleeping, and Jimmy sighs in relief.

"I wanna ride the pony." Duncan mumbled.

Jimmy raised an eyebrow in thought, why would Duncan dream about ponies?

"Huh, that's intriguing," Jimmy smiled as he chuckled, but then he mumbled as he felt disturbed., "I don't even wanna know." Now, to check on Sherman.

“Sherman! Are you alright?” Jimmy asked, concerned.

“I’m Fine, I’m okay!” Sherman said, punch drunk as he lifts the toolbox, dazed.

Duncan's alarm clock rings. Duncan stirs awake. Sherman frantically hides under the toolbox, and Jimmy froze back. The alarm clock kept on ringing, but it's moving forward, and it crashes to the floor. Duncan's face brightens.

"Oh, yeah!" Duncan said, grabbing Jimmy. "It's time for liftoff! Whoo!"

He opens the door and runs downstairs, preparing to blow Jimmy to pieces!

Alarmed, Sherman comes out of the toolbox and races to the closing door. He jumps to it, and the door stops on his arm. He looks out the door, and sees Vinny racing toward him.

Sherman scurries and he tries closing the door, but it hits Vinny's face. After a few tries, the door closes.

"What am I gonna do now?!" Sherman yelped. "Come on, Sherman! Think!"

Sherman sighed in disappointment. This was all his fault. He's on his own, or is he, as he looks around, he notices the Mutant Toys looking at him.

"Guys!!" Sherman asked, as he saw the Mutant toys but none of them were pleased as they turned their backs on him. "No, no, no! Wait! Wait! Listen! Please!  There's a good toy down there and he's -- he's going to be blown to bits in a few minutes all because of me. I gotta save him." Sherman then said. "But I need your help!!"

All of Duncan's mutant toys glared at Sherman, he attacked them when all they were doing is reattaching Jimmy's arm. With no one else to help him, Sherman has completely given up on hope....but he stops sulking as soon as he notices Lex peeking from out of the shadows, looking concerned for Sherman.

"Please, Lex. Jimmy's my friend, he's the only one I've got...." Sherman then said, sadly thinking about his friends who may never wanna see him again. To him, it seems as if because of what happened yesterday, it would seem as if Sherman's friends lost faith in him.

"So I've heard, but don't worry little child. Lex, Freddy, Bonnie, Chica, Foxy, Darkseid, Flippy, Bill and the Greasers and I have endured his torturing us long enough." Frieza then said, determined. "Get the mutants and tortured gathered."

Lex went to his right as he bangs in some sort of code on Duncan's metal bedpost.

"You mean, you're going to help me? B-But what about the dog?" Sherman said, surprised. Yet, he did have a good point.

"Trust me." Frieza then said.

All of Duncan's mutant toys looked at each other.

"I'm on board." Broly replied. The mutants nodded and look to Sherman. Sherman looks alarmed, but surely enough, more Mutant Toys gather around Sherman! He smiles. These dudes are willing to help out after all!

"Good, because we're gonna have to break a few rules, and I promise, it's going to work." Sherman then said. "Since Duncan would be the only one to get up this early, meet me downstairs in half an hour."

Meanwhile in Trent's Room, The movers cart out the last load.  A forlorn Trent clutches onto Jimmy's "spaceship" box in one hand and his Back to the Future VHS in the other. Trent scans the empty room and heaves a sad sigh, he might as well face it, his favorite toys are gone for good.

In Duncan's Backyard, Duncan comes out of the she carrying a bunch of materials under his arm. He drops the junk down beside an inanimate Jimmy. Jimmy was concerned, he's running out of time!

Back in Duncan's room, as 
Vinny is planted right outside Sid's bedroom door, poised to attack anything that exits, Sherman has created a little diagram of the house and yard out of dominoes and Scrabble tiles. He points to it with a pencil as he addresses the mutants.

"Alright, I need Broly with Mercy here, Lex with Petunia to meet up with Harley. Roller Sideshow Bob and I aren't allowed to move until We get the signal, so let's move!" Sherman said, determined to end this Nightmare.

The toys all break out of their huddle, and got started on their plan as Petunia and Lex opened a vent grate, and went through the air shaft, and headed towards where the porch light was.

"Wind the wind up toy!" Frieza said.

Meanwhile, Lex and Petunia come to an intersection. Lex chuckles. and they head down the right tunnel. 

A bottom of wall insulation is pushed aside to by the 2. They make their way towards a junction box sitting in the center of the floor. Luthor and Petunia lift the loose junction box. Lex takes the end of the line off Petunia's fishing reel, hooks it onto himself, and is then lowered down through the open hole.

Hanging halfway down the front door, Lex begins to swing. Eventually he swings far enough to reach his destination: the doorbell. Lex presses it.

Then, Sherman got on Sideshow RollerBob and so did the other toys and waited for the signal, then the wind up toy was winded and then, the door bell was heard, that was the signal, indicating that Lex rang the door bell!

Skeleton hand in a box went onto and opened the door, the wind up toy fled the room, and caused Vinny to go after it, and opened it, and the Mutant Toys went downstairs.

Meanwhile, Vinnie wasn’t so lucky as Duncan’s mom opens the door, and the mutant toy leads the dog outside the house, tricking him. In that moment, Lex catches the Wind up Toy and is quickly reeled upwards back into the roof as Duncan’s mom shrugs and closes the door. Vinny smashes into the closed door without even noticing before growling.

“Badda-bing.” Vinnie said, sarcastically, “I know everyone hates me, but come on."

As the mother went upstairs to get ready for work, she fails to notice a familiar group of mutants led by a familar pull string doll and by now RollerBob has really picked up speed. He shoots underneath the kitchen table, through the maze of chairlegs, straight towards... the pet door. The mutants all push back causing the Rollerskating mutant to do a wheelie. They smash through the doggie door......and catapult into the bushes.

Duncan was getting things ready for "launching the kid into orbit". As Sherman looked through the bushes, there's Jimmy still taped to that rocket. Lex and a few Mutants shoot out into the yard from a drain pipe. They exchange a thumbs-up with Sherman, Sherman smiles that stupid dog's out of the way. Time to prove his innocence.

" Uh, Mission Control...is the launchpad construction complete? --(simulated static) Uh, Roger, rocket is now secured to guide wire. We are currently obtaining the...ignition sticks. Countdown will commence momentarily. Stand by -- (simulated static)" Duncan said, still getting things ready in the tool shed. "Ey, Mom, Dad! Where are the matches? Oh, man, forget it, I found them!"

The rest of the mutant toys got in position. Jimmy sighs, thinking that this is his last few minutes alive. Jimmy then stopped as he sees a group of Toys getting into position as Sherman ran up to Jimmy.

"Sherman! All right! Get me outta here!!" Jimmy said, excitedly, he knew Sherman wouldn't give up on the Superman of Nickelodeon, well, at least not without any help, anyway. But then, Sherman shushed Jimmy.

"Why?" Jimmy asked, confused.

"Do not panic! Everything's gonna be alright..." Sherman replied, then he went into toy mode.

"Are you insane?!" Jimmy gritted his teeth, then he saw Duncan heading out of the shed, prompting Neutron to go into toy mode.

"Houston, all systems are go. Requesting permission to launch --" Duncan said, playfully.

Duncan noticed Sherman on the ground. "Hey! How did you get down here?" Duncan then said, he shrugged it off and sticks a match prominently in Sherman's Pocket and tosses him onto the grill of an open barbecue.

"Oh, well, You and I are gonna have a cookout later." Duncan said, laughing. Duncan walked over to Jimmy at the launch pad, and got ready.

" Houston, do we have permission to launch? -- (simulated static) Uh, Roger, permission granted.  You are confirmed at T minus 10 seconds...and Counting." Duncan said, lighting the match.

Jimmy knew this was it. Once that fuse lights, Jimmy and Sherman are goners.

"Oh, man, this is going to be cool! 10......9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1!" Duncan then said, grinning menacingly as the match moves towards the fuse.

But before the match could touch the fuse, a familar voice box said, "STOP RIGHT THERE!!!"

Confused, Duncan pulls back from lighting the fuse. He turns to look at Sherman still lying lifelessly atop the barbecue except for the sound emitting from his voice box.

"Huh?" Duncan asked, he puts out the match. Curious, he stands up and begins walking over to Sherman.

"You're not going anywhere, snake eye." Sherman's voicebox said.

"What?!" Duncan said, impatiently.

"Let's just say the Leaning tower of Pisa wasn't always leaning." Sherman's voice box was heard, then Duncan picked him up.

"Stupid toy, it's busted." Duncan scoff, irritated. Aiming for the garbage bin, Duncan was about to throw Sherman.

"Who are you calling "Busted", buster?!" Sherman's voice box said, stopping Duncan and taking him by surprise. This has never happened before.

"Are you talking to me....?" Duncan gasped in shock, he won't like where this will be going. No way.

"That's right, I'm talking to you, Duncan Ryanson!" Sherman's voice box notified a surprised Duncan. "We've been watching you. We’re tired of being kicked around, pulled apart, burned, blown up..."

With Sherman talking on his own, this scared Duncan, and what scares him the most is that the string wasn't pulled at all.

"Wait, what do you mean, "we"?!" Duncan gulped in terror.

"That's right, your toys!" Sherman's voice box was heard.

Then, Duncan hears something out of the soundbox, a badly burnt doll rising from the ground, and a broken toy struck rising as well, and both are heading towards Duncan. Jimmy comes to life and grins as this happened.

Then, 3 GI Joe toys rise out of the mud led by Astro the windup toy, 1 with a nail through his head, another headless, and one without arms.
 
Duncan looks on in terror as they start creeping toward him. Vinny's dog bowl flips up, revealing the Rolf, all chewed up and covered in dirt. Duncan gasped at the sight of the toys moving toward him.

"Rolf will release his rage now!" Rolf angrily shouted.

And right on cue, some of Duncan's toys came out of the ground, with Broly chuckling darkly, and then out of the watery mudslide, Frieza, Lex, Darkseid arose, and more of Duncan's toys circled around the boy, scaring him.

Then, Duncan felt something fall on his head, it was Dr. Octagonapus. Duncan screamed in terror as he was surrounded. Jimmy was surprised by this plan.

"So from now on, for each time you don't take good care of your toys, we'll find out, Duncan!" Sherman's voice box said. "We toys can see...." Then, Sherman's head turned 360 degrees, further frightening Duncan. Sherman then said, gruffly, "Everything."

Duncan was clearly hyperventilating in fear. Then, the final straw that broke the toy camel's back was driven when Sherman's face came to life, glaring at Duncan.

Sherman gritted his teeth and said, "So play nice."

Duncan dropped Sherman and screamed in terror, running to his front lawn. Sherman then got up and everyone jumped in triumph, pumping their fists, cheering happily.

In the Ryanson's front lawn, Duncan sees his classmate, Courtney, holding a Doll.

"Courtney! The toys, they're alive!" Duncan yelped, but then, he gulped as he saw the doll. "Nice dolly!"

Courtney, confused, shoves the doll in Duncan's face as Duncan screams in fear, running into the house. It was from that moment on that Duncan gave up his reign of terror, and victory has come to toys everywhere.
With Jimmy in grave danger, Sherman teams up with the Mutant Toys to save Jimmy before it's too late! Can he do it?
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